Production: Teacher Feedback of Rough Cut

Negative

Shutters in the allyway in Dalston - It distracts artist and makes mise en scene look poor.
Get rid of shot in the archway as too much attention is drawn to 'premier inn' signs, instead of the artist.

Positive

Base tracks are nice and well framed.
Great use of mise en scene.
Performance from the artist is strong.
Most complete rough cut that Rebecca has seen so far.

Teacher feedback

Hello girls.  I've had a look through your blog and here's some feedback:

- The mood board is missing - this needs to be posted quickly;
- Zhane and Sharina (because I've marked your work - Eugenie - Dan will give you your feedback today - just ask) - you both have quite a few things missing - Sharina in particular (Mulvey analysis, previous student video analysis, synergy activity, and all of your skills development blogs).  Zhane - Goodwin's theory blog is empty and you've yet to reflect on your AS research and your progression with your blogging this year.

Don't fall behind girls - you've got some brilliant ideas and it would be a shame if these ideas weren't reflected in your blog.  I was hoping to see a write up of what we talked about in the lesson yesterday, along with a plan of what you are doing.  Take a photo of the notes you made and put that up.

I'll take another look at your blog next week.

Rebecca