Production: Teacher Feedback of Rough Cut

Negative

Shutters in the allyway in Dalston - It distracts artist and makes mise en scene look poor.
Get rid of shot in the archway as too much attention is drawn to 'premier inn' signs, instead of the artist.

Positive

Base tracks are nice and well framed.
Great use of mise en scene.
Performance from the artist is strong.
Most complete rough cut that Rebecca has seen so far.